Talk:The Coming of Harold Stonewatch

I won't edit it, yet. But do note that you can't make paragraphs like that. Do it like this:

- Jack arrived at the boat. Rose was angry because she thought Jack was too fat to go on the boat with her. So, the two started struggling, trying to push each other off the boat. However, they quickly fell in love with each other's big noses. Their activites did not prolong much farther due to the timely interference of a large chunk of ice. The boat sunk, the two struggling lovers died and a ridiculous film made millions in profit.

"Somewhere, over the rainbow, a person's head explodes!"

Soon after, there was a huge war between ugly men, small men, smaller men, tall pointy-eared men, normal men, a bearded freak and a woman. This too made millions, not as one film, but as three. Can you believe it? Well, at least it didn't involve a school/castle in which every year a plot takes place that ends just before the summer holidays.

The End -

--Admin Richeron [ T | C ] 17:05, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, I was wondering about the little boxes appearing.

--EordanKaikeyiKalthir 17:53, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Much better! --Admin Richeron [ T | C ] 23:27, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Sorry it's taking ages... I'm kinda adding to it every day, a few minutes at a time, but I know where it's going and it's a proper RP Story (though I'll add more to my other one soon). --EordanKaikeyiKalthir 21:06, 7 June 2009 (UTC)