Talk:The real Scarlet Crusade?

Sorry but Louise certainly didn't cause the miscarriage, which was during inspections. Nor did she drag her by the hair! However, after carrying her down to the crypts, a senior scarlet told her to take Asti back up to the Cathedral, and she did so in a temper, being sloppy, not vindictive.

--Llouise 19:49, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

Right, making the changes now, If memory serves Imoen actually didn't see what happened but heard from Endjinn, remeber this is the story I saw from Imoen's point of view so if Imoen only hears one side of story that is what is going to put in.

However in this case I forgot that Imoen didn't actually see it and it was Endjinn that told her that she dragged her up some stairs and that is what gave her the misscarriage I also remeber yelling both from Louise and Astibeth.

I also would like anyone who is reading these as a request if I could get some postive or constructive feedback please?

Anyway changes made are as follows...

- Changed the scene with Louise

- And put in the name Astibeth

Imoenak

Louise: I only tried to help her up! and look how she took it! hmph! stupid Apostate. Imoen: What's going on? Louise: She started leaking during prayers I thought she wet herself at first, but the High Emissary said her water broke and that she was a traitor. Then she started acting all weired and was nasty, she was forced downstairs...I tried to help her up but she was nasty so I decided to drag her up instead! Imoen: Louise... Louise: What!? she's a traitor and a apostate now! Imoen: ...just...forget it, where is he now? Louise: Oh just being tortured downstairs...some of the breathren are already down there. Imoen: Right.

1) Astibeth was bleeding at inspection, not leaking waters at prayers. Astibeth was unconscious, not being nasty. 2) Louise did not know, ever, what happened to Endjinn, but terrified it was something bad.

--Llouise 09:28, 20 June 2007 (UTC)