Talk:The Fall of Imoen Part 2

First of, Imoen...

WHOA!!!

This was one of the most interesting parts of your storyline that you've written so far! =D

I was pratically swept away!

Constant drama, no pause for the reader. I couldn't stop reading. xD

The only things that I can think of which could be better are a few spelling errors, and one little mistake:

"Elizabetha looks at Imoen and takes off the ropes and ties to a gryphon. She turns to Suzanne who looks horrified and scared."

Elizabetha was blind at this time, and didn't regain that single eye till much later after her fight with the Embrace. ;) Regardless, superb!

^_^

--Elizabetha 15:27, 11 August 2007 (UTC)