Talk:The final strings

Louise was saved by Kisun and Seynard and was unable to speak for 4 weeks due to shock.

--Llouise 18:49, 14 June 2007 (UTC)

True: "Well a few months ago the small town of Lakeshire was under attack by what we were told at first demons,"

False: "when we arrived at the scene we saw humans, gnomes, night elves and dwarfs slaying innocent townsfolk."

True: "There is this one woman however Lashela I think her name is…she had this book…and with each kills their soul went into this book…we do not know what this book will be used for but it is know as “the black book”."

Elizabetha arrived when they were burning the bodies, and was told by Nomine and other Starlighters what had taken place. She later on, when living with Richeron at his mansion, had a nightmare where she dreamt of the daemonic attack on Lakeshire, presumeably seeing it with the eyes of one of the victims. The nightmare was caused by being told by Entriia and later Merwyn what Lashela had done there with her minions and the daemons that she had summoned. The purpose of the book remained unknown, but Eliza did manage to find out that the souls taken by the book were used to power the book for something, and that these souls then ceased to exist. This knowledge was though after Redemptio Coronae had been formed, I think.

You can refer to The End of All Things, if you wish.

--Elizabetha 16:18, 15 June 2007 (UTC)

Changed only Elizabetha's speech where she mentions how she got the info, Imoen didn't know ent till later on nor did she know Merwyn so it would be dumb putting in those names.

As for the reasons I didn't change who saved Louise, I personaly didn't know that IC I know now OOC but that's not what im trying to achieve in this script the whole purpose of it is it tells the story about what Imoen knows at the time.

Same goes for the ( for some reason ) Faulse of saying the dark embrace attacked lakeshire and had members from diffrent races...I really don't understand why that is for some reason wrong to put that in.

Also Elizabetha never told Imoen about a dream she had so that can't be put in what I've put in the script is near enough what she said, she mentioned the Dark Embrace, what the black book was the attack on lakeshire and then said "I can't be you foster mum anymore as i'm only five years older than you."

So...any good points at all?

Imoenak

It was wrong to put it in because Elizabetha never spoke of the attack as it was written in the story. It was pretty much common knowledge that it had been daemons that did the killing (rumours spread like epidemics), and that Starlight were among the defenders, although they arrived somewhat too late.

I linked the story so that you could have some additional info, not so you should write it as though Imoen was there.

Apart from all that, it was yet another interesting read. Keep it up.

--Elizabetha 10:17, 16 June 2007 (UTC)