Talk:Toobi

Excuse me if this comes off offensive.. But did you have to make such a obvious rip off from Naruto with your character?

But on a slightly more serious note, you might want to review your characters name, past and such, at the current standing it gives a very negative interrest in the character. (Mallaliak 21:24, 4 November 2008 (UTC))

Hello and thanks for your comment.
Yes the whole inspiration to the concept of my characters and RP stories comes from the manga Naruto. As you noticed each character have a name thats nearly equal to the names of some certain characters in that manga.

However the background stories is what i would consider alot different from the main story in Naruto.

It is only the characters that contains similar values and not really the whole story behind them.

To notify some differentes:
 * 1) The background story is based on the nightelves story.
 * 2) The founders isnt naruto related either.
 * 3) The uchiha from naruto didnt learn fire from dragons.
 * 4) Madora(toobi) killed the family and NOT nitachi.
 * 5) Robito was Madora's friend and there doesnt exist a character nearly similar to "kakashi"
 * 6) And alot of other differentes.

And notify some similarities:
 * 1) Its a bloodline called Uchisa, very similar to Uchiha
 * 2) The names is nearly similar to the specific naruto characters.
 * 3) The uchiha clan is known for their abilities with fire.
 * 4) Madara in the manga is still alive as tobi.
 * 5) Toobi uses the same way as tobi to hide he's identity (acting stupid)
 * 6) and proberbly some others that i just cant think of at the moment.

So in conclusion i would say "a rip off" is a bit of a strong word. However i openly admit my inspiration.

About the character names in the past. Well the names is just some i came up with. And i just use them to make the story have a little more sense since it would be confusing if i refer'd to people as "person1 and person2". I dont intend to priority the past to make my character interesting. I intend the background story to difine what future my characters will make for themselves. My priorities is to make this whole unik story into something that will lead to great RP interactions.

You are more than welcome to post more critics in relation to the story idea. And im always open for suggestions to what would make the concept even better.