Talk:Judged

Marvellous!

--Angst 17:24, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

The exercise we talked about? :)

Clear difference in style to your previous work, and I think it's a step in the right direction. Show, don't tell. Let the reader make up their own mind about what the character is feeling, rather than explaining it -- thinking about the text forces the reader to pay attention, and helps them care about the story and the characters. Good work.

-A

Heh, you see right through me... Yeah, I thought I'd follow your advice. Must admit that I found it...uhm, hard, heh. I like to describe to much. Think it has a name, even. All-knowing-writer's-view?

Anyway, gonna try keeping this style, I think. Is an interesting way of writing. =)

Thanks. ^_^

--Elizabetha 23:12, 16 August 2007 (UTC)